This is a very cute piece. However, I believe the room should be darker with the shutters closed because, of course, with so many love letters SOMEPONY'S ging to be staring in through the window. Or mabe you should draw some faces staring in through the window. I also noticed how hard she's breathing. How funny! Also, shouldn't she line up some furniture against the door? Or maybe she's not strong enough. The expression is also hysterical. I could just hear what she's thinking. 'Oh why does this happen every valentines day?' Because you're adorable fluttershy! Bravo! Oh, now I just MUST favorite.
I thought that this art was truly amazing. I love the detail you put into this! It is clearly not just that "2-minutes-on-paint" type deal! You put REAL effort into this. But I have to agree with Slap23 about the perspective. Since the only light is through the window, then I might change it to the light coming from somplace other than the window so you can keep the brilliant shading on Flutters' face. Another thing I loved about this masterpiece is the message. I love the humor! It makes the viewer smile. I really expect to see more amazing artwork like this all over DA!
Need a hand... er... hoof in sorting those out, Fluttershy? :That would be very much appreciated, thank you. Always happy to help out. So how many we got? : 250 and counting. Where are these letters coming from anyways!? I don't even know KNOW most of these ponies! You'd be freaked out if you knew where they came from
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